Plot- Final Draft

Due to feedback I recieved on my first draft, I put more detail into the final draft of my plot, the changes include; different location, interviewing people to give myself more filming opportunities, more creative editing, particularly with the interviews and including photographs/animations during the credits. My final draft of my plot can be seen below.

Setting the scene-Zoom into a map showing Fistral beach on it then fades to show the sign for Fistral beach, with the main character walking past, cuts to character walking down onto the beach walks past camera and across the beach the with the camera following. While this is happening I introduce myself and explain my ambition while the camera is following me down to the beach.

When on the beach i put the board down on the sand and the films titles fades onto the board, then it cuts to the character waxing the board and explaining why it is used and the best way to apply it. Once done I will attach the board leash and head into the water and the music starts in the background after the camera then fades in and out between a set of interviews (which will include creative editing to make the interviews more appealing to the audience) and action shots, after the final interview it shows me catching the wave, standing up and wiping out, and then it cuts to a small set of interviews (which will be in different locations) on how not to wipe out. After this I will come back to shore and talk about how I caught the wave but ended up wiping out meaning my ambition still isn’t fulfilled and then walk off. This fades to black and credits roll with action/photographs going on over one half over the screen.