Tuesday, 28 February 2012
Magazine Review Final Copy
After comparing my review page with those that I previously analysed I felt that I needed to add the 'LOOK CLOSER' part that is included in some Empire reviews that contains interesting fact about the film or the topic/location of the film. I also chose to include a couple more images on the review to give a bigger perspective on my film.
Below is the final amended version of my review
Below is the final amended version of my review
Monday, 27 February 2012
Sunday, 26 February 2012
Additional Feedback
While editing my short film for the final cut I gained some more feedback on what I was doing with the text appearing on the screen during the interviews.
Below is a screenshot of what I originally had it like for the final cut.
For my target audience the current text and colour was not suitable as it would be hard for children to read.
To fix this I changed the colours of the text and changed the font style to a more block shaped font. These changes would mean that children would be able to read the text a lot easier. This is helpful due to the text quickly appearing and disappearing on the screen.
Below is a screenshot of what I originally had it like for the final cut.
For my target audience the current text and colour was not suitable as it would be hard for children to read.To fix this I changed the colours of the text and changed the font style to a more block shaped font. These changes would mean that children would be able to read the text a lot easier. This is helpful due to the text quickly appearing and disappearing on the screen.
Tuesday, 7 February 2012
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