Additional Feedback

While editing my short film for the final cut I gained some more feedback on what I was doing with the text appearing on the screen during the interviews.

Below is a screenshot of what I originally had it like for the final cut.

For my target audience the current text and colour was not suitable as it would be hard for children to read.

To fix this I changed the colours of the text and changed the font style to a more block shaped font. These changes would mean that children would be able to read the text a lot easier. This is helpful due to the text quickly appearing and disappearing on the screen.